Parable

The Chalk in the Cooper's Apron

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In the dry years the village shared one well, and beside the well hung one slate.

The rule was simple, and nobody argued with it: you marked before you drew. One stroke per bucket, under your household's name. At the end of the season the elders read the slate and knew who had taken what, and nobody could say the water had gone to the loud instead of the thirsty. There was one piece of chalk. It sat in a dish on a nail. You picked it up, made your stroke, put it back. It took the time of a breath.

The cooper had the biggest job in the village. Every few days he filled the barrels for the dye house, forty buckets, sometimes fifty, hauled one after another from first light until the sun was well up. He was a careful man. He didn't like the idea of fifty little strokes going up one at a time, because what if a barrel cracked and he had to pour half of it back into the well? The slate would say fifty and the barrels would hold forty, and the elders would read a lie in his name.

So he did what seemed to him the honest thing. He took the chalk from the dish, put it in his apron, and kept it there while he worked. When the barrels were full and he knew the true number, he'd write it all at once, and the slate would never be wrong about him.


That morning a girl came for two buckets for her grandmother. The dish was empty.

She waited, because you don't draw without marking. That was the rule, and it was a good rule. Then the smith's boy came, and the widow from the hill road, and two brothers with a handcart, and a line grew down the lane. Nobody could see the cooper. He was round the back of the dye house, pouring, and the chalk in his apron was the last thing on his mind.

The line did what lines do when they can't see the front. It made up reasons. The well was fouled. The elders had closed it. Someone had stolen the chalk out of spite. The smith's boy, who was quick and impatient, said he'd go find whoever had it and take it back by force.

The widow said no.

She had seen the cooper walk past with his apron bulging, and she had a fair idea where the chalk was, and she had a fair idea what the boy would find: a man halfway through fifty buckets. Take the chalk off him now, mid-work, and what? He'd lose his count, the half-filled barrels would have to be tipped out and started over, and the dye house would be a day behind. The water wasn't gone. Nothing was broken. One man was holding something that was only ever meant to be held for a breath.

"He'll come," she said. "Sit down."

He came at mid-morning, sweating and pleased with himself, and stopped dead at the sight of twenty neighbors sitting in the dust by a slate they couldn't touch. He wrote forty-four in one long careful row of strokes, put the chalk back in its dish, and the line moved in a minute and a half.


He was ashamed, and he said so, and then he said the thing that was harder to say. "I thought I was being careful."

He was. That was the trouble. He had wanted the slate never to be wrong about him, and to make sure of it he had kept the mark back until he knew the whole of his work. It felt like accuracy. It worked like a lock. The longer and more careful his job, the longer everyone else stood in the lane.

The elders didn't make a new rule. They made a change so small the children laughed at it. They tied a second piece of chalk to the slate with a length of string, and they asked the cooper to mark each bucket as he drew it. If a barrel cracked, he could rub out a stroke. A stroke was easy to correct. A morning wasn't.

He grumbled that his row would look untidy, and it did. Some days it had a smudge in the middle where he'd changed his mind.

Nobody in the lane ever minded the smudge.

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